This one's a poem written by Neeraja... and apart from this there's only one other poem on the blog by Vishesh. Have a look at it in older posts.
Neeraja says, this poem could also work as a psycho analysis of your personality... depending on your interpretation of it :P!Type away and tell us what you think of the poem in the comments tab and we'll ask Neeraja to finally have a say :).So this is how the poem goes...
The smell of jasmine fills my sacs;
Under my gentle squeeze,,,
I smell her cry of agony...
The smell of fresh jasmine blood;
Leaves my palms stained
And there she lay dead and drained
jaigurudev
love
rahul
4 comments:
arey...i dint understand anything!!!....i only understand rhyming words...and only the last 2 lines endings rhymed....does this mean i am hopelessly mundane!!??
hey... i think it somewhat like this...
see you must never even try to cause slightest of the slightest pain or harm to anyone whom you love ,because your very minute act sometimes might lead a serious disaster very much unexpeted....
just as is said ,,, the pain of the jasmine which you might have just touched with love but when your slightest squeeze lead to its death....!!!!!
:) :)
My idea of what it means... A woman/child's suffering before her eventual death!
what is this?
No answer from the judge?
Wat's up with her?
:) :)
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